Alone,in her heaven,she was the happiest star in the whole universe.Do you know why?-nobody knew...But one day,the stargazesr and the poets didn't find the shining star in the moonlit sky.It looked so dim and mat without her gloss...
The only one who knew why the star has dissapeared was that man for whoom she was shining on.He was the one who was gazing her the entire night,who was reading to her poetry,who was speaking about all the stupid things on the Earth...He was the only one who knew how to listen to her,how to make her smile,and finnaly-how to make her shine again...One day,he just haven't come to the window as always.This was that fatal day when the star finnished her road.She didn't explode because of heartburn...she didn't lose her light because of jealousy.She stoped her way to happiness because the supreme happiness was reached.She stopped to shine because she didn't want to bind him to her and screw up his life.She stoped to shine because she loved him...
Wow !!! GReat story KatiUsa , mmmm how much soul you put into it .!!!In espeCiaLLy . ..I liKe THiS tHough : "Alone,in her heaven,she was the happiest star in the whole universe" AnD tHe End ...:<>is PERfECt ,,,... "becouse she loved him" ...I like YOu storY ReaLly ..nOt bECoUSe shE is INTEresTiNg ?...bUt bECOUSe She is sPeCial ....Helen :*
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ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful and creative story. I love your description and the way you bring the reader right into to text. Wonderful writing.
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